编辑: You—灰機 2019-07-15

2013 and

2018 in a certain university. Strikingly, taking up an occupation accounts for the highest proportion of all the three options in consecutive two years, the proportion of which slightly declining from 68.1% to 60.7% in the corresponding period. It is also noticeable that there is a slight decrease in the marked increase in the percentage of graduates pursuing further education, which rises from 26.3% to 34% at the same time. The tendency is justified on the grounds that follow. To begin with,the ever-growing emphasis putting on the career-oriented education and the support from the government level stimulates the enthusiasm of graduates to seek a job after graduation. In addition, when it comes to the rising tendency of students going for further study, there is no denying that the affluence of average Chinese as well as an overall booming academic atmosphere in China have provided both material and spiritual support for people'

s aspiration for knowledge and all-round development within themselves. Under such circumstances, there is no wonder why common college students intend to pursue advanced study both at home and abroad. Admittedly, the orientation after graduation is absolutely a matter of personal choice and independent of each other. Thus, it is also advisable for every graduate to strike a balance between academic pursuits and social practice in an effort to meet the more diversified and personalized challenge in the coming future. 评分标准

1、第五档 A 节(9-10 分)B 节(13-15 分) 很好地完成了试题规定的任务 包含所有内容要点;

使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;

语言自然流畅,语法错误极少;

有效地采用了多种衔接 手法,文字连贯,层次清晰;

格式与语域恰当、贴切;

对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果.

2、第四档 A 节(7-8 分)B 节(10-12 分) 较好地完成了试题规定的任务 包含所有内容要点,允许漏掉

1、2 个次重点;

使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;

语言基本准确,只有在试图 使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误;

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰,组织较严密;

格式与 语域较恰当;

对目标读者产生了预期的效果.

3、第三档 A 节(5-6 分)B 节(7-9 分) 新东方网考研频道 http://kaoyan.xdf.cn/ 新东方网考研频道 http://kaoyan..xdf.cn/ 基本完成了试题规定的任务 虽漏掉一些内容,但包含多数内容要点;

应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求;

有一些语法及词汇错 误,但不影响理解;

采用了简单的衔接手法,内容较连贯,层次较清晰;

格式和语域基本合理;

对目标读 者基本产生了预期的效果.

4 第二档: A 节(3-4 分)B 节(4-6 分) 未能按要求完成试题规定的任务 漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点,写了一些无关内容;

语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;

有较多语法结构 或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;

未采用恰当的衔接手法,内容缺少连贯性;

格式和语域不 恰当;

未能清楚地传达信息给读者.

5 第一档: A 节(1-2 分)B 节(1-3 分) 未完成试题规定的任务 明显遗漏主要内容,且有许多不相关的内容;

语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复;

语言错误多,有碍读者 对内容的理解,语言运用能力差;

未使用任何衔接手法,内容不连贯,缺少组织、分段;

无格式与语域概 念;

未能传达信息给读者.

6 零档(0 分) 所传达的信息或所用语言太少,无法评价;

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