DOC《短文改错（共10小题； 每小题1分, 满分10分）》

短文改错(共10小题;

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此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词. 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线(__),并在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意: 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分. My classmates and I were to graduate next month. We were determined to do something. After a heating discussion, we decided on making a video to record our experience at school. It took us a whole week to collect materials, during that we interviewed our teachers or took photos of every aspect of school life. The editing part before that was tough. We discussed what to put into the video. Some compromises are unavoidable, but the video turned out perfectly. Several days later, when the video was playing on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The teachers and students shared a great time. That surely gave to us a great sense of achievement. 【答案】next前加the heating→heated experience→experiences that→which or→and before→after are→were perfectly→perfect playing→played 去掉give后的to 【解析】 【分析】 本文为记叙文.作者和他的同学们在毕业前制作了一个纪念意义的视频,并取得了很好的效果.文章记叙了这个制作过程. 【详解】第一处:考查冠词.根据语境,此处使用的是过去将来时.next week跟一般将来时连用,the next week与过去将来时连用.故next前加the. 第二处:考查形容词.此处意为"在一次热烈的讨论之后".heated"热烈的,激烈的",heating"加热的,供热的".故heating改为heated. 第三处:考查名词复数.句意:们决定制作一个视频来记录我们在学校的经历.experience表"经验"是不可数名词,表"经历"是可数名词.故experience改为experiences. 第四处:考查非限定性定语从句.此处为非限定性定语从句,先行词是a whole week,关系词与介词during在从句中做时间状语,应使用关系代词which引导.故that改为which. 第五处:考查连词.句意:我们采访了老师,拍下了学校生活的方方面面.此处表并列顺承,应使用并列连词and.故or改为and. 第六处:考查连词.根据语境,此处指"之后的编辑工作很艰难."故before改为after. 第七处:考查时态.根据语境,此处描述的过去的事情,应使用一般过去时.故are改为were. 第八处:考查形容词.固定搭配:turn out (to be)p+adj."结果是怎么样的".故erfectly改为perfect. 第九处:考查过去分词.句意:几天后,当视频在毕业典礼上播放时,反响很好.此处应使用过去分词,构成被动语态.故playing改为played. 第十处:考查动词.句意:这无疑给了我们很大的成就感.固定搭配:give sb. sth."给某人某物".去掉